Showing posts with label Hidden Under Her Heart. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Hidden Under Her Heart. Show all posts

Wednesday, February 27, 2013

#BookReview ~ Hidden Under Her Heart

Title:      Hidden Under Her Heart
Author:  Rachelle Ayala
Genre:   Women's fiction
Rating:   5/5 stars


I loved this book! Rachelle Ayala is one of my critique partners, so I got to read the beginning of this book in its first stages and then the entire completed book all at once. In my opinion, this is her best work yet.

First off, I really like Lucas. He has his flaws and is perhaps a bit extreme in some of his views, but deep down he is a loving, caring man who was someone I could really relate to and admire. He stands by his convictions and tries to do the right thing. He is a jokester and some of his jokes go a little extreme, but it shows his playful, fun side too. My favorite part about Lucas was the growth his character took in the book. 

Maryanne is also a realistic character. Even though her opinions are at the different end of the spectrum from mine, I could feel her turmoil and enjoyed her journey and watching her conflicts. She has a lot of growing up to do throughout the book, and I found it fascinating to watch her journey. It was almost better because I didn't agree with her viewpoint. 

The cast of supporting characters was enjoyable too, complete with difficult family members and friends who sometimes caused more harm than help.

For me, this book was pretty intense. When I got the final version I read it in just 2 evenings because I had to find out what happened. This story touched me and also made me really think about my opinions on abortion and why I feel the way I do. Overall, the romance between Maryanne and Lucas was satisfying and the action parts were exciting and fun to read. This one is a hit, and my favorite book of Ayala's so far. Can't wait for her next book!


Happy reading, everyone!
~~ Chantel~~

Friday, February 1, 2013

#Interview ~ Author versus Character ~ Rachelle and Lucas

I've been having such a fun time with these author versus character interviews! Lucky for all of us, Rachelle Ayala and the hero from her newest novel, Lucas Knight, agreed to stop in today and treat us with yet another one. First, let me tell you about the book! 

Maryanne Torres is a compassionate nurse who fails at relationships. After a string of losers, she swears off premarital sex, hoping to land a marrying type of man. 

Lucas Knight, a law-school dropout, moves to California to train for the Ironman Triathlon. He's smart, sweet, and everything Maryanne wants in a man, but their relationship suffers from his dedication to the sport. Seeking consolation in the arms of a handsome preacher's son, Maryanne attends a church party where she is raped. 

Maryanne is pregnant from the rape and plans to abort. But the identity of her rapist is hidden in her baby's DNA. Lucas asks Maryanne to seek alternatives and pledges to support her through the pregnancy. When Lucas becomes the prime suspect, Maryanne must clear his name and make a life changing decision. 

The rapist has other ideas. In order to destroy the evidence, he offers Maryanne an illegal offshore abortion. With Maryanne's life in danger, Lucas races to save her and her baby. However, Maryanne hides a secret that threatens to tear them apart forever. 

A 99,000-word women's fiction, HIDDEN UNDER HER HEART deals with the consequences of rape and abortion.

First off, thank you both for coming. I really enjoyed the story and I'm anxious to find out more about how this relationship came about. Why don't you tell me how you two met and how long ago it was? 

Lucas: I think we met at Pescadero State Beach about a month ago when I first moved to California.

Rachelle: Yes, and you were surprised how warm it was for a winter day. 

Lucas: You Californians think it’s cold when the temperature’s below 50. 

Rachelle: It was windy, you’ll have to admit. But can’t beat the scenery. 

Lucas: The waves were so foamy, crashing off those rocks. Love it, and California. 

I have to admit, I love the California coastline the few times I've been there myself. Enough about the scenery. What was your first impression of each other? 

Rachelle: I saw a nice young man who offered me an arm when we climbed down the rocky path to the beach and thought, what a gentleman. 

Lucas Knight
Lucas: My mother always taught me manners. Once I found out you were a writer, I made a wish. I thought it’d be neat to be the hero in a real novel. 

Rachelle: Little did he know. 

Chantel: Ha, ha. Fiction isn't all it's cracked up to be. So, what does Lucas do that annoys you the most? 

Rachelle: Ah… he’s such a sweetie, but he definitely keeps you on your toes, don’t you, Lucas? 

Chantel: In what way? 

Rachelle: Practical jokes and pranks. He knew better than to try that CPR scene on me, but he’s got me checking for Saran wrap on my toilet seats and sniffing for Icy Hot before applying toothpaste. I can’t believe you got Maryanne with that baby powder in the blower dryer one. 

Lucas: Ha, ha, you should have seen the video. 

Rachelle: And she’s still with you? I would have replaced your contact solution with vinegar. 

Lucas: *rubs eyes* What? She told me I had an eye infection! 

Chantel and Rachelle: *laughs* 

Chantel: Lucas, if you could say just one thing to Rachelle, what would it be? 

Lucas: Even though you put me through a lot of pain, I believe I am a better person, more willing to understand a person first before barging in with my opinion. I love Maryanne more than anything in this world, and I absolutely cherish her and her little girl. I used to run from my problems, but they will never see me walking away again. 

Chantel: That's very sweet. What’s the most embarrassing thing that’s happened between you two? 

Lucas: The physical details Rachelle put in when my ex-girlfriend tried to seduce me. I’m a normal man, and it took a lot of willpower to step back. 

Chantel: Well, the important thing was you exercised your willpower. Rachelle, what do you feel the worst about doing to Lucas? 

Rachelle: The intense agony Lucas experienced after seeing the rape video. The feeling that the woman he loved was destroyed coupled with the guilt of not being there for her and having pushed her away. It’s hard to imagine how anyone would react to seeing that visual. I was amazed at his fortitude to go to her with the intention of cheering her up and showing her that she’s a worthwhile and valuable person. 

Chantel: If the characters aren't tortured, you're not doing your job as a writer though. :-) Do you think you two will meet again in the future? 

Lucas: Rachelle promised me walk-on roles in the future. I’ll need to be there to support my training partner go through his horrific adventure. I hope I can be a help to him. 

Rachelle: Definitely. Lucas, you’re a wonderful friend and possibly the sweetest, most romantic male character I’ve worked with so far. Many readers tell me to send a Lucas their way, and one of my readers said after all her troubles with the Barry’s of the world, she finally found her Lucas. 

I certainly think Lucas is great! So glad to hear we can expect to see a bit more of him in the future. Thank you both for being here!

Author Bio: 
Rachelle Ayala was a software engineer until she discovered storytelling works better in fiction than real code. She has over thirty years of writing experience and has always lived in a multi-cultural environment. 

Rachelle is an active member of online critique group, Critique Circle, and a volunteer for the World Literary Cafe. She is a very happy woman and lives in California with her husband. She has three children and has taught violin and made mountain dulcimers. 

Visit her at: http://www.rachelleayala.com or follow @AyalaRachelle on Twitter. 



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Happy reading, my friends! Have a fantastic Friday!
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Monday, January 21, 2013

#NewRelease ~ Hidden Under Her Heart

HIDDEN UNDER HER HEART (A Story of Abortion & Courage) by Rachelle Ayala 

Maryanne Torres is a compassionate nurse who fails at relationships. After a string of losers, she swears off premarital sex, hoping to land a marrying type of man. 

Lucas Knight, a law-school dropout, moves to California to train for the Ironman Triathlon. He's smart, sweet, and everything Maryanne wants in a man, but their relationship suffers from his dedication to the sport. Seeking consolation in the arms of a handsome preacher's son, Maryanne attends a church party where she is raped. 

Maryanne is pregnant from the rape and plans to abort. But the identity of her rapist is hidden in her baby's DNA. Lucas asks Maryanne to seek alternatives and pledges to support her through the pregnancy. When Lucas becomes the prime suspect, Maryanne must clear his name and make a life changing decision. 

The rapist has other ideas. In order to destroy the evidence, he offers Maryanne an illegal offshore abortion. With Maryanne's life in danger, Lucas races to save her and her baby. However, Maryanne hides a secret that threatens to tear them apart forever. 

A 99,000-word women's fiction, HIDDEN UNDER HER HEART deals with the consequences of rape and abortion. 

From the Author 
Hidden Under Her Heart is an emotional and hard-hitting story about a young woman facing a heart-wrenching decision. We’ve heard the rhetoric, maybe even argued over the issue of abortion and rape. But behind the debates are real people—women and men with real problems and feelings. My story is not meant to be preachy, but compassionate, especially for post-abortive parents seeking closure. I think people on both sides of the fence will find meaning in the changes that both Maryanne and Lucas go through. Ultimately, it is an uplifting story, and my hope is that it will be a help to you. 

About the Author 
I am the author of three novels: Michal’s Window, a historical romance between King David and his first wife, the princess Michal, Broken Build, a romantic suspense thriller set in a Silicon Valley startup, and Hidden Under Her Heart, a story about a nurse wrestling with her decision to abort. My stories tend to be dramatic and emotional, crossing genres and cultures. I like to dive deep and live through my characters’ eyes. Each of them are passionate but flawed women paired with conflicted men with good hearts. I hope you enjoy the emotional journey I take you on. I love to hear from readers. Please contact me on Facebook: http://www.facebook.com/RachelleAyalaWriter or my blog: http://www.rachelleayala.com 

Book Links 
Hidden Under Her Heart http://www.rachelleayala.com/p/hidden-under-her-heart.html 

Personally, I love this story (review to come soon). For the next three days (Jan. 21st through 23rd) Hidden Under Her Heart is going to be on sale for 99 cents at both Barnes & Noble and Amazon. You don't want to miss this book!

Happy reading everyone! Have a good week!
eeeChantelfff

Wednesday, November 14, 2012

Spotlight on Rachelle Ayala - Her Talents Know No Bounds!

In the midst of introducing you all to my fabulous critique partners from www.critiquecircle.com, I started getting a lot of requests from people to appear on my blog. I love helping out new authors and featuring their work, but I got a little sidetracked in my quest to introduce the authors who mean the most to me in the writing community. I've been very anxious to introduce this critique buddy, Rachelle Ayala. 

Rachelle is great as a beta reader and crit buddy. Plus, her and I have such a good time. Even though our writing couldn't be more different as far as styles and overall ideas and events, the similarities in our novels are quite humorous. She wrote Broken Build at the same time as I wrote Always & Forever. The similarities are crazy. Both heroines have an injured leg. They are both hiding their true identity. We even picked the same song for our characters to fall in love to! The crazy thing is, we both wrote these things before reading the other person's work. There are many more instances of similarities throughout the book, these ones just give me the best chuckle.

Rachelle is a diverse writer and likes to explore different genres. As well as being great at that, she is an ex-computer program and speaks code like no one's business. Need help formatting your book to put it on Amazon, Barnes & Noble, or Smashwords? Confused what the heck an NTX file is or how to build a table of contents? Rachelle, wonder woman, can make this all happen for you! In fact, I'm hiring her to format my projects and save myself the headache! 

I am so grateful to have met Rachelle and have her as one of my writing besties! Check out her fabulous books below!

Looking for historical romance? This is based on the Bible and set in biblical times. Though I don't read a lot of that type of book and was a bit hesitant, Michal's Window is a rich, entertaining novel that I loved. Want to see a different take on King David's first wife? This is a fantastic read. 


Not your Grandma's Bible Story...

It's not easy being a woman, least of all princess of Israel. Married as a prize, abandoned as a wife, Michal fights to claim her rightful spot next to King David, the man she loves with all her heart. 

Separated by war, concubines, and kingdom politics, Michal embarks on a journey of adventure and heartache where she is befriended by a goddess-worshipping priestess and tempted by a Philistine prince.

From reading scrolls high atop the palace walls to seduction with a henna-painted body, Michal is not your ordinary Bible heroine. Join her in Michal's Window and let her delight you with her courage, devotion, and outrageous passion in her relentless drive to win back her husband. 

Content advisory: sexual situations, blood and violence


Want to buy Michal's Window? 
Amazon US or UK
Paperback at Barnes & Noble and Amazon


Looking for more of a mystery? Do you like a tough challenge? Check out the blurb for Rachelle's romantic suspense title, Broken Build. 

When a woman wrongs a man… can a man forgive and love?

Jen Jones hides a horrible secret behind her new degree, toned body, and exciting job at Silicon Valley’s hottest startup—until a man linked to her past is killed in a hit-and-run.

CEO and founder Dave Jewell is about to land a huge deal. He doesn't need blood on his car, threatening phone calls, and Jen wrapped in broken code and blackmail.

A gang of thugs hunts Jen, and she takes refuge in Dave’s protective arms. Together, they must thwart a killer and rescue an innocent victim from their past. Love blossoms, but a damaging revelation points straight at Jen, threatening to tear them apart forever.

Content advisory: language, sexual situations

Want to buy Broken Build? It's available on Amazon:
Amazon US or  UK

And my personal favorite is the one she is currently working on, but you will all have to wait. Hidden Under Her Heart is women's fiction and expected publication is Spring 2013. 







Hidden Under Her Heart
is a story about abortion and courage. Maryanne Torres tries to gain validation and love by giving more in each relationship than she takes. Lucas Knight believes his reason for existence lies in becoming a triathlon champion. An unwanted pregnancy forces Maryanne to examine her past while Lucas is torn between concern and bitterness. Meanwhile, a tiny life hangs on the balance. Is it worthless because it is unwanted?









Also - for those of you authors looking for a good formatter or beta reader, here's the link to what Rachelle offers and her prices - http://www.rachelleayala.com/p/book-formatting.html

I hope you enjoyed meeting Rachelle Ayala! Happy reading, my friends!
eeeChantelfff

P.S. Don't forget my policy to read the samples before you buy! Everyone's tastes are different.