I think this could be fun for everyone. I will post six sentences from one of my books every Sunday. Feel free to comment or give me suggestions to improve--whatever you feel like doing. This first post is from chapter one of Always and Forever and I don't think requires explanation. Enjoy!
The man eyed her with undisguised pity, and his gaze flicked to her left leg. He’d obviously noticed her limp.
That limb would never be the same, but at least she could walk. A whisper of fear laced her spine as she remembered the cold steel at her neck, the white-hot pain as the knife slid into her belly. The man’s breath had smelled of onions, though he wore an expensive brand of cologne. Lilly’s mind refused to release these odd little details, and the terror of them returned in random moments.
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