Lilly pulled her hand out of Zach's and brushed aside the compliment. She tried hard not to feel offended by his unconscious arrogance. Before she lost everything, she probably looked down at poor people the same way he looked at her, without ever knowing she did it. What would Zach think if he discovered she used to have money and connections and family of her own?
The silence stretched out between them. Lilly tried to think of a way to refuse him without putting her job in jeopardy--she couldn’t afford to offend Zach or Leticia, which she feared outright refusal would do.
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Great 6! You've captured her angst here and thus increased the tension... Also a nice, unobtrusive way to slip in backstory
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Opps! Fixed the title... thanks! I appreciate you reading. I'm off to check out your sentences this week.
DeleteEasy to read! Nicely done.
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading! I loved your 6 this week!
DeleteOoh! A sticky situation. I love how you've told us so much about Lilly in a few sentences and without breaking the flow. Very nice!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Kate, for reading. And your 6 were just terrific, too. Such fun!
ReplyDeleteGreat six, Chantal. Could feel Lily's struggle.
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DeleteThanks for reading, Liz! Congrats on your trilogy, The Beaumont Brides Collection!
ReplyDeleteWhat a difficult situation for her! Great six.
ReplyDeleteThanks for looking! I also enjoyed your 6.
DeleteThanks, Chantel! It is nice to "meet" you too! :)
DeleteI love these 6 lines, because it shows us a lot about Lilly (and only 6 lines!). It's nice to see the inner struggle. Great job Chantel!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Melinda! Your 6 with Amanda and Jake was great this week!
DeleteOoh, this sounds like a good story! Fab six!
ReplyDeleteThanks, Gayle! I looked at your 6 as well. Your free books sound really interesting. I'll check them out.
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