Sunday, April 15, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday ~ 4/15

Well, Zach stuck his foot in it, and now has to try to mend some fences with Lilly.  This week's scene is from Zach's point of view and happens after the disastrous scene from last week.



     “I come in peace.” He held up a bouquet of pink and white lilies and bottle of wine for her inspection. “I made an ass of myself today. I’m hoping you’ll forgive me. Can I come in?”

     Lilly bit her lip and stared at him so long, Zach was sure she would refuse him entry.

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6 comments:

  1. Awww, that's sweet (of course after what he pulled it darn well better be, lol). Great 6!

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  2. I bet she lets him in. Lilies are an excellent choice. Great six!

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  3. Yay, glad he's able to be man enough to do this! Very sweet!

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  4. Love this part! I also love that he brought Lilly lilies! I love him!

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  5. Aw... yes, he has some fences to mend, doesn't he? I like that she's making him worry, but I bet she lets him in. :)

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  6. Thanks, everyone! I appreciate your comments!

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