Sunday, April 29, 2012

#SixSunday ~ 4/29

This is the last Six Sentence Sunday I am going to post for a while.  There seems to be much more interest in my other blog topics and frankly, I've been a little too busy and getting very little writing time.  Since there are fewer visits to this page, I'm going to focus on other things -- mainly working on the new book!  For those of you who have been coming, I hope you have enjoyed it, and I really appreciate your support and comments along the way.

I didn't want to stop without a word and so decided to sign up one more time this week.  Who knows, I may post a few snippets in the future on my new story when I have more done on it. :-)

This week's snippet follows last week's from Always & Forever.  Zach has followed Lilly into her kitchen and is watching as she arranges the vase of flowers he brought her.  We are in his POV.



She seemed attracted to him, though today's events may have changed her mind.  At the very least, she appeared to enjoy the frequent flirting he instigated.
It was a different story when he touched her.  An innocent pat on her arm or a slight caress against her shoulder altered Lilly’s demeanor noticeably.  Tension consumed her body on those occasions, breaking the comfortable companionship they had achieved.  Not for the first time, he wondered what happened in Lilly’s past to make her so cautious.
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Thanks so much for reading and for your comments. To join in for yourself or to read other snippets from some truly talented authors, visit Six Sentence Sunday.

Have a wonderful week, everyone!

15 comments:

  1. Altering Lilly’s demeanour..pictured it instantly, Great six!

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  2. I love the feel of this six, it's very authentic. Your Six's will be missed. Happy writing.

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    1. I appreciate it Jess! No worries, I'll still be around and may join up again later when I can find more hours in my day.

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    2. P.S. I thought your six was cute, Jess. Surprised me at the end!

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  3. Working on your new story? Woohoo! Love these six!

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  4. Great description on this six! Now I'm wondering what happened in her past!

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    1. Well, Zach and the reader both find out in a future chapter ;-). Thanks so much for stopping by, L.J.!

      Your six this week are really intriguing. I enjoyed!

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  5. I'll miss your six sentences each Sunday, Chantel! Thanks for giving us this last six sentence glimpse into Lilly and Zach's relationship before going. *sniff*

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    1. haha - you're welcome! I'll still be around checking out everyone else's six. I'm really hoping Ellen is headed to a happy future in your book!

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  6. Great insight he has here.... Sorry you'll be leaving us! Good luck with your writing...

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    1. Thanks, Angela! I'll be watching to see when you get a contract for your book. It truly is wonderful and I appreciate you letting me beta read it. Can't wait to see it out for sale!

      No worries - this is so much fun that as soon as I get more writing done, I'm sure I'll dive back in and give you guys some snippets from my new characters, Madeline and Donovan.

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  7. Another intriguing six, Chantel! I've enjoyed reading about Zach and Lilly! I'll miss your SSS posts! Good luck with your writing!

    I'll see you Twitter and Facebook! :)

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    1. Thanks, Lorraine! I still be following you to read more about Annie!

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